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	<title>Comments on: 30 second synopsis of my fiction</title>
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		<title>By: emily</title>
		<link>http://www.pennyhero.net/2009/05/27/30-second-synopsis-of-my-fiction/comment-page-1/#comment-270416</link>
		<dc:creator>emily</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Nov 2009 18:28:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey!  Thanks for the questions

The short answer to your one question is that yes, that time between conception and birth are intentionally there as part of the queen&#039;s character and her own plans and motivations for doing what she&#039;s doing.

Plus you have to think of the politics.  This world is supposed to be as &quot;real&quot; as possible and if you suddenly unexplainably (literally by magic, and in this case, a type of magic no one has seen or heard of before) discover without a doubt that your husband is not who he says he is, but have no evidence for it beyond your gut (haha) feeling, do you really think you&#039;d just confront him?

What was your second question even if you already answered it?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey!  Thanks for the questions</p>
<p>The short answer to your one question is that yes, that time between conception and birth are intentionally there as part of the queen&#8217;s character and her own plans and motivations for doing what she&#8217;s doing.</p>
<p>Plus you have to think of the politics.  This world is supposed to be as &#8220;real&#8221; as possible and if you suddenly unexplainably (literally by magic, and in this case, a type of magic no one has seen or heard of before) discover without a doubt that your husband is not who he says he is, but have no evidence for it beyond your gut (haha) feeling, do you really think you&#8217;d just confront him?</p>
<p>What was your second question even if you already answered it?</p>
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		<title>By: af 336</title>
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		<dc:creator>af 336</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Nov 2009 13:02:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I don&#039;t think it&#039;s silly at all, but I&#039;ve already got a few questions that if you 1 have thought of won&#039;t be tough to field at all and if you 2 haven&#039;t thought of might cause you some grief.

- The queen finds out who this emperor&#039;s son is AFTER she&#039;s conceived, right?  If this is the case, why doesn&#039;t she confront him or how does she conceal this?  Since she uncovers his identity PRESUMABLY in the between-time of sleeping with him and giving birth (else why would she bed him at all?), there&#039;s a sizeable window of crap-he&#039;s-the-enemy realization and it&#039;ll be interesting to see how you handle that.

- I just answered my second question, so you&#039;re actually only left with that one.  I&#039;m sorry.

PS that took me like two minutes to read&amp;comprehend. 30 seconds my arse.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I don&#8217;t think it&#8217;s silly at all, but I&#8217;ve already got a few questions that if you 1 have thought of won&#8217;t be tough to field at all and if you 2 haven&#8217;t thought of might cause you some grief.</p>
<p>- The queen finds out who this emperor&#8217;s son is AFTER she&#8217;s conceived, right?  If this is the case, why doesn&#8217;t she confront him or how does she conceal this?  Since she uncovers his identity PRESUMABLY in the between-time of sleeping with him and giving birth (else why would she bed him at all?), there&#8217;s a sizeable window of crap-he&#8217;s-the-enemy realization and it&#8217;ll be interesting to see how you handle that.</p>
<p>- I just answered my second question, so you&#8217;re actually only left with that one.  I&#8217;m sorry.</p>
<p>PS that took me like two minutes to read&amp;comprehend. 30 seconds my arse.</p>
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		<title>By: xJAYMANx</title>
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		<dc:creator>xJAYMANx</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 29 May 2009 05:37:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Emily: Interesting! Kinda like a female Dante (demon/human) from &quot;Devil May Cry&quot; or Belldandy&#039;s older sister Urd (goddess/demon) from &quot;Ah! My Goddess&quot;... Both kinda twisted too, lol... Although in this case, if the queen thinks in terms of &quot;being violated&quot;, wouldn&#039;t she try to kill her daughter first of all? Hehe, just my two cents, of course. ^_^</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Emily: Interesting! Kinda like a female Dante (demon/human) from &#8220;Devil May Cry&#8221; or Belldandy&#8217;s older sister Urd (goddess/demon) from &#8220;Ah! My Goddess&#8221;&#8230; Both kinda twisted too, lol&#8230; Although in this case, if the queen thinks in terms of &#8220;being violated&#8221;, wouldn&#8217;t she try to kill her daughter first of all? Hehe, just my two cents, of course. ^_^</p>
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